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<strong>2nd Draft Critique Service: Picture Books </strong>You'll Love This 2nd Draft Critique Service If: Your goal is to write a picture book You want feedback on your completed picture book before querying an agent Your picture book is for nonfiction or fiction genres The craft of writing takes dedication, patience, and persistence. Whether you have a completed nonfiction or fiction picture book, if your goal is to get published the traditional way, you'll need to find an agent or editor. Ensure you make

You'll Love This 2nd Draft Critique Service If:

  • Your goal is to write a picture book
  • You want feedback on your completed picture book before querying an agent
  • Your picture book is for nonfiction or fiction genres

The craft of writing takes dedication, patience, and persistence. Whether you have a completed nonfiction or fiction picture book, if your goal is to get published the traditional way, you'll need to find an agent or editor. Ensure you make the best first impression possible on prospective editors and agents , get a professional picture book critique from our 2nd Draft editors!

With a 2nd Draft Picture Book Critique, you will get the specific, tailored advice you need to make your picture book publishing dreams reality. After a thorough evaluation of your submission, one of our hand-selected professional critiquers will give you detailed feedback and recommendations. You'll not only learn what's working in your picture book, but what's not, and – most important – how to fix it!

What Can You Expect from a 2nd Draft Review?

2ndDraft Critique Service provides a high-level review of your work, pointing out reasons your work may be getting rejected, or may not meet the standards of traditional publication. It offers:

  • An overall evaluation of the manuscript's strengths and weaknesses.
  • For works of fiction, specific comments on elements such as plot, characterization, dialogue, and setting.
  • For works of nonfiction, specific comments on focus, development, organization, clarity, visual elements (if applicable).
  • Specific comments on appropriateness to proposed target market.
  • A red flag on consistent issues of grammar, mechanics, spelling or style.
  • A clear idea of how to revise

Our 2nd Draft Critique Editors Will Not:

  • Rewrite or revise for you, except in the case of providing an example of how to revise on your own.
  • Correct grammar, mechanics and spelling or check for correct style (e.g. Chicago Manual or AP styles). This requires a professional proofreader or copyeditor. However, a reviewer will point out any patterns of surface-level error that may pose a significant problem for you.
  • Provide any fact-checking.
  • Provide answers or advice on legal issues.

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Maximum Manuscript Length

2nd Draft Picture Book Critique Service is for picture books up to 750 words.

Formatting Requirements

All documents must be submitted electronically in ONE of the following formats:

  • Word document (.doc or .docx)
  • Rich Text File (.rtf)

All documents MUST adhere to the professional manuscript formatting standards, which are:

  • 8.5 x 11 page size
  • Double-spaced throughout
  • 1-inch margins on top and bottom
  • 1.25-inch margins on left and right sides
  • Arial, Courier, or Times font
  • 12-point font size

*If your submission does not meet these formatting requirements, we will either return the document to you for correction, or we will apply these settings ourselves when possible, and only critique the first 750 words.

Do you love this critique service? Write about your 2nd Draft experience!

There are no refunds for this service. No discounts apply.

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ForTheLOVEofBooks
Belleville, US
★★★★★ 4
Pretty Darn Good
Format: Kindle
So I’ve been on a omega kick and this definitely hit the spot. Madison was frustrating at times with how she acted towards Lucas, Gray, and Rian. It was like she said towards the end, she didn’t believe she deserved nice things. It would have been nice to hear from her best friends again. They kind of were there in the beginning and the gone except for mention of text messages received from them. I feel like her friends would have been great help in encouraging Madison to go with the pack and never give Brent another chance because he was toxic. I loved Rian. His personality was awesome. His humor. His ability to make Madison comfortable whenever she was feeling overwhelmed. And the fact he fell for her and she fell for him first. They are cute together. I do feel like Lucas was the odd man out though. Like Lucas didn’t develop as much of a relationship with Madison. I would have really liked to see more development in the relationship between them. It was also the same with him and Rian. There is really no relationship displayed. Most of the relationship being displayed is between Rian and Gray. Nevertheless, I loved reading about the dynamic that came to fruition during the entirety of this story. Madison finally got her happiness. And Brent finally got punched in the face. Everyone got exactly what they deserve.
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Reviewed in the United States on September 6, 2022
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ediebegonia
Pawtucket, US
★★★★★ 3
Pack's Promise was okay but not great
Format: Kindle
Pack's Promise was okay but not great. I won't recommend it to anyone that I know. PRO: * Very likable characters * Lots of steamy scenes that are written very well * The spelling and grammar are good * The punctuation is good with the exception of using hyphens instead of commas. Lots of hyphens. Lots and lots of hyphens. CON: * Almost no interactions with any characters outside of Madison and the pack * Nearly no plot. They meet, get together for a heat, agree to make it permanent, done * Quite a few typos such as extraneous words, missing words and words out of order THINGS TO KNOW: * More steamy scenes than storytelling * A lot of MM & MMM, some MFMM during heat
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Reviewed in the United States on January 5, 2023
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LJM
Lowell, US
★★★★★ 5
such a good read
Format: Kindle
Madison, Lucas, Grey and Rian were made for each other!!! First time reading from this author and I’m not disappointed!!! Absolutely love the Love in this book and couldn’t ask for a better OV!
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Reviewed in the United States on October 25, 2023
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Beccaroo
Chelsea, US
★★★★★ 4
Fluffy and Nice Omegaverse
Format: Kindle
… this would have made 5 stars but for 2 reasons. A.) there were quite a few typos; misspelled words, missing quotations, “the his” mistakes, and various signs that maybe a proofread would do good. B.) the writing was quite textbook. Late blooming omega is struggling with her new self, finds a absurdly wealthy pack of alphas, every thing is almost insta-love but she resists, then decides to love herself and let everyone be happy. Rian was my favourite (obviously the author’s favourite too because he got the most page time) but I wish we could see more of his CEO side? He went to work maybe ONCE the entire time. Gray was supposed to be the “growly one” but he turned out to be puppy dog. Lucas was a genius brainiac doctor - but also super alpha with an aggressive hindbrain with a breeding k*nk?? And then there was no actual “breeding”?? Spice 3/5 - normally omegaverse books are super high on messy smut but this was tamer. Romance 3/5 - insta-love that was then resisted because of personal hangup’s Plot 2/5 - weird paced head hopping, showing the same scene from different POV’s that made me feel like it was 2 steps backward, 1 step forward. Humour 4/5 - there were a dozen lines that genuinely made me chuckle out loud Would have been five stars but the lack of proofreading and the predictable plot made me unable to get up to ADORED IT level - four stars is still and official ENJOYED IT, y’all. This isn’t a bad rating. The “Club Heat” has intriguing possibilities so I’m going to give the second one a shot.
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Reviewed in the United States on March 31, 2023
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Amanda
Lowell, US
★★★★★ 5
A good read
Format: Kindle
A good read, just fluffy cuteness, no antagonism. I like all the characters. It could have used another round of editing however, glanfds being one error that cracked me up, and my personal pet peeve was that the author kept using the word fill instead of feel, which I promise you are not interchangeable haha, but it's definitely better than the majority of books I read on here mistake-wise.
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Reviewed in the United States on November 28, 2024

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