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Hook, Line, and Sinker: How to Determine Your Book's Hook and Craft an Attention-Grabbing First Page

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Hook, Line, and Sinker: How to Determine Your Book's Hook and Craft an Attention-Grabbing First PageYOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF: You are struggling to condense your novel's hook into one line You are currently composing a novel and want to make sure your work gets read You have been rejected by agents and editors, and want to evaluate why your novel didn't make the cut You are getting page requests from agents, but falling short after that point ABOUT THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR: You only get one chance to make a first impression,and that one

YOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF:

  • You are struggling to condense your novel's hook into one line
  • You are currently composing a novel and want to make sure your work gets read
  • You have been rejected by agents and editors, and want to evaluate why your novel didn't make the cut
  • You are getting page requests from agents, but falling short after that point

ABOUT THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR:
You only get one chance to make a first impression,and that one chance with a reader lasts only minutes. It is no longer acceptable for a book to “get good on page 40." From your “hook," the one-sentence logline you use to describe your book, to the first page of your novel, it's critical to grab the reader's attention immediately,whether that reader is an agent, editor, or consumer. Not only do you want to quickly pull readers in with your story idea, you also need to establish your narrative voice as compelling, believable,
talented, and authoritative.

So how do you best accomplish this?

In this presentation, instructor and literary agent Jessica Regel shows you how to grab your reader's attention with your hook and first page. Using real life examples from her own client list, Jessica examines the hooks and first pages from published books to show you the dos and don'ts of opening your book and the common mistakes that drive agents crazy and stop them from reading the rest of your work.

Runtime: 91 minutes

WHAT YOU'LL LEARN:

  • How to write an attention grabbing one-line hook
  • When it's appropriate to compare your book to another book
  • Why it's important to hook the reader from the first page
  • Why a prologue may do you more harm than good
  • Common mistakes of first sentences and first pages
  • Overused beginnings and clich√©s that can drag down your work
  • The benefits and pitfalls of starting with action

INSTRUCTOR
Jessica Regel has been with JVNLA since 2002. She maintains her own list of award-winning writers while also handling Film and Audio rights for the agency. Originally from Iowa, she was working at her local library when she was offered an internship at JVNLA and she promptly moved to New York City. After receiving her B.A. in English Literature from Hunter College, she became a full agent at JVNLA, representing both children's and adult writers. With energy and persistence, Jessica works closely with her writers to develop and sell their work to publishing houses.

NOTE: Writer's Digest does not offer refunds for OnDemand Webinars. All sales are final. OnDemand Webinars do NOT include a critique.

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This 2-in-1 boxset is an absolute must-have for anyone looking to break into real estate investing, regardless of experience or financial situation. The first book is a step-by-step guide that breaks down the intimidating world of real estate into 7 simple steps, perfect for beginners. The author does an incredible job of making complex topics like deal analysis, financing, and negotiation feel approachable and doable. I especially appreciated the practical advice on how to finance your first deal even if you're starting with little money or poor credit. The second book dives deep into rental property investing, offering a wealth of knowledge on both long-term and short-term rental strategies. Whether you're aiming for mid-term rentals or vacation properties, this guide equips you with the tools to confidently manage your investments. The inclusion of expert tips on property management, deal analysis, and exit strategies is invaluable for anyone looking to scale their real estate portfolio. The extra bonuses, including guides on tax planning, apartment investing, and property checklists, are just the cherry on top. Whether you're a complete beginner or someone looking to expand their real estate empire, this boxset provides everything you need to succeed. Highly recommended for anyone ready to dive into real estate and start building wealth!
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Describing this book as thorough is an understatement. The title starts off with a bold claim, one that might seem skeptical, but the authors actually delivered. I'm beyond impressed, to say the least. I've had my nose in this book off and on all day and yet I'm still only exactly 33% through it. I'm not even sure I can say I'm reading this book. It's more like I'm studying it. Chapter 6 in particular rang a bell. "Buy on the fringe and wait. Buy land near a growing city!" This reminds me of an approach I know and love which is self-titled "the borderlands strategy." Hello places like Frisco, TX / Dallas suburbs. This book is a masterclass in professional, knowledgeable people offering an extremely high-quality product at a great price. There are even enticing offers at the end of each chapter, which is something marketers (and real estate individuals) can really take note of. (Lead gen.) So many good things to say. Probably the most concise way of doing so is by saying it really is a real estate bible, yet is still easy to read. No complex terms or challenging math. No walls of text. (Examples that do include math are straightforward and easy to follow.) Great buy that has been extremely enjoyable and thought provoking. Can see myself referring back to this constantly for years and years.
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Solid breakdown of real estate investing for beginners
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Aye, this book actually surprised me. It’s super beginner-friendly and doesn’t just throw a bunch of complicated real estate jargon at you. I think in Chapter 5, they covered creative financing options, which I found pretty dope. There’s a part where they explain “subject-to financing” basically, how you can take over a mortgage without making a new one, which could mean little to no down payment. Didn’t even know that was a thing. The book also lays out step-by-step strategies for getting started, from choosing a strategy to closing deals. Some parts felt a little surface-level, and I kinda wish they went deeper into financing for people with bad credit, but overall, it’s solid. If you’re new to real estate and want a simple, no-BS breakdown, this one’s worth checking out.
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